Wednesday, November 20, 2013
Arugementive Essay Final Draft
The non-fiction graphic novel "Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi, is about Satrapi growing up during the Iranian Revolution. Johan Bennett, Chief Executive Officer, thinks that the novel "Persepolis" is inappropiate for the 10th grade to read due to its content. The novel "Persepolis" should not be banned from schools due to its content.
One reason that schools should not ban "Persepolis" is that it explains that Satrapi is not a bad role model. For example, while at school the teacher says that Iran has not had political prisoners for 3000 years, but Satrapi explains that it is a lie (144, 4-5). This is important because Satrapi explains what the government is a lie and she tries to tell what really happened. Additionally, in college Satrapi explains that women dress code is enforced, but men don't have a dress code and weat whatever they want (297, 2-6). This,is important because Satrapi isn't afraid to speak what is on her mind about the dress code and unlike everyone else she doesn't think about the consquences about speaking her mind. It is clear that "Persepolis" explains that Satrapi is not a bad role model.
Another reason why "Persepolis" should not be banned from schools is because it exposes students to another culture/country. For example, she shows how men and women dress in Iran (75, 1-2). This is important because it explains that women have to follow a strict dress code and men don-t have a strict dress code while in public. Also, you can't have alcohol or parties in Iran or you get arrested and lashed (105, 7). This is important because the laws in Iran forbid people to have alcohol or to throw parties. It is clear that "Persepolis" teaches students about another culture/country.
Some people would argue that "Persepolis" is an inappropiate book to read. It is true that Persepolis" uses crass language and shows graphic violence, but it's used to describe wgat really happened during that event. Nevertheless, the crass language was added because that is what people said and the graphic violence gives you an image on what happened to people (51, 1-4). This is important because it lets students know what people really said and what really hapoened to people who were caught breaking the law or in political prison. Therefore, the use of crass language and graphic violence justifies the actions of what people did and what they said.
The final reason that "Persepolis" should not be banned from schools is that it can teach students life lessons. For example, she took all of her anti-depressants, then told herself it would be the last time she saw the sun and went to sleep only to wake up three days later and then decided to change her life style( 273,-274). This is important because it explains that you can change your mistakes and make things better for yourself. Furthermore, her mom reminded her that she must be able to forgive people,even if they did something bad or soneone they knew did it (46, 1-8). This important because it explains that you should forgive those who did something bad and forgive people they know that did sonething bad. It is clear that "Persepolis" can teach students life lessons.
I just gave examples on why the novel "Persepolis" should not be banned from schools. I explained that "Persepolis can teach students about a different culture/country, it can teach life lessons, and shows that Satrapi isn't really a bad role model. "Persepolis" is a good book that can teach students alot of things about Iran and should not be banned from schools due to its content.
Monday, November 11, 2013
Argumentive Essay
In the non-fiction graphic novel "Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi, Satrapi describes
what it is like growing up in Iran. Then eventually moving away to Austria by herself at the
age of fourteen. To eventually coming back to Iran as a young adult with many problems she
had not resolved while still in Austria. Johan Bennett Cheif Executive Office thinks that the
Novel "Persepolis" is inappropriate for the 10th grade to read do to its content. "It was
brought to our attention by a parent representative that it contains crass language, graphic
violence, torture, sexual content, lewd humor, an instance of suicide, and other images that
are not appropiate for general use in the 10th grade curriculum"(1-3). I disagree with
Bennett that this book is inappropiate. This book explains how life goes on in Iran where
people have no freedom to speak what is on their minds about the government. Also where women
only have to follow a strict dress code and the men don't.
Bennett thinks that "Persepolis" should be banned from all schools that have the 10th
grade curriculum read it, but have Advanced placement and Honors classes trained specially
trained to teach and present "Persepolis" approiaetly. The novel "Persepolis" is about
Satrapi describing what it was like growing up during the Iranian Revolution. Then eventually
moving to Austria to be safe and continue her education. Then moving back to Iran because she
had nowhere else to go. Bennett finds "Persepolis" inappropiate because Satrapi talks about
torture because that's what was happening to people in Iran. Satrapri also explains that she
became a drug dealer to get money and had many sexual because she had very bad relationships.
Bennett thinks Satrapi shouldn't have talked about those things and left them out of the
novel completely.
Satrapi talked about torture in the book to point out that is what happened
to people when they got arrested and sent to prison. "Ahmidi... Ahmadi was
assassinated. As a member of the guerillas, he suffered hell. He always had cyanide on
him in case he was arrested, but he was taken by surprised and unfortunatly he never
never had a chance to use it... so he suffered the worst torture..." (51,4). Satrapi
attempted suicide, but failed because she could not live with the problems in her life
anymore, but after that she changed her lifestyle and became a better person (273,1-3)
(274-275). Satrapi talks about being a drug dealer due to a relationship with one of her
boyfriends. Both Satrapi and him did drugs and there was one spot where Satrapi got drugs
and so everyone asked for drugs. "Markus was proud of me. So proud that he told the whole
school that his girlfriend had contacts at Cafe Camera"(222,7). This quote explains that
her boyfriend told everyone she could get drugs.
The quote in the second paragraph explain that those events happened to Satrapi
and that they were important if they were written in the novel. Everthing in the novel
happened to Satrapi and she explains how they affected her and what actions she did after
those events. Satrapi tried to commit suicide because she was depressed and had many problems
in her life. Because Satrapi didn't die that motivated her to become a better person and
to not give up on herself no matter what problem was thrown at her. Satrapi became a drug
dealer do to the choice of people she hung out with. All her friends did drugs and her
feel like part of the group. Satrapi did drugs also because her boyfriend Markus knew
where to buy drugs. All of Satrapi's actions were affected by those who were around her.
I explained why I disagree with Bennett and gave examples to support my opinion
on the novel "Persepolis". I explained why Satrapi tried to kill herself, why she did
drugs, and how she changed after all of those events. I think "Persepolis" is appropiate
for the 10th grade to read because it opens up a new idea on how we think of Iran and what
people have to go through in Iran.
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